The paper is done but is too general, and I need to focus on the first question. Please edit the paper to match the first question. Only add some paragraphs in some strategic parts of the essay. Because in the final I need the paper reflects the first question. REMEMBER THE PAPER IS DONE, I ONLY NEED YOU EDIT A LITTLE BIT THIS, I attached the paper too
as long as it’s perfectly clear that’s the question you answered
Maybe you could make some edits in order to reflect we answered the first question
Please only use the link below and the attached sources for the paper; see attached images for prompts and directions. I will also attach the rubric for grading.
http://nationalhumanitiescenter.org/pds/amerbegin/exploration/text7/text7read.htm