demonstrate a strong grasp on spelling, punctuation, grammar, and sentence structure, demonstrate a deep understanding of the setting and has used strong text evidence from the text to show this understanding in the three reviews and in the comments, makes two strong and creative selections for items to pack that relates directly to the text and is able to make a deep personal connection to the setting in their travel itinerary to the 3 settings they chose, has successfully imitated the voice of the characters in the writing in their reviews.